Friday, November 13, 2020

Mary B- Monday Night Sunday


 This photo is titled “Monday Night Sunday”. I took this photo on a Monday night on my desk in my room. I used a lamp I had on my desk for light. I took this photo on my Canon camera. To edit this photo I adjusted the color balance by turning up the pinks and blues and turning down the yellows. I also cropped the image so that the ice cream would be off center. This picture could be better if It had less light on the ice cream. It is a little over exposed. 

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I think this picture is super cool! I really like the muted colors and the focus you have on the light. I think you're right, the ice cream itself is a little over-exposed, but I really like the shadows you have going on. I also think the way you cropped it to make it off-center was a really good choice! Really great picture!

Anonymous said...

Your picture is very nice! I like how the wood panels and the lines on the wall act as leading lines. Your photo's name is very unique and creative. Like you mentioned, there is a little too much exposure on the top of the ice cream but it almost looks like the ice cream is glowing and that is cool. I like the shadows in the image also. There are a lot of different ones and it makes the image stand out. I like this photo because it makes me want to eat ice cream and it is very fun to look at.

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed looking at this photo! I agree that the top of the ice cream is a little over-exposed, but other than that spot the lighting on the rest of the image looks good. I think the shadow of the ice cream cup is really neat, but I wish the bottom part of the shadow was not cropped off. I think this photo is a keeper and I would hang it on my wall because of the calm colors and feeling it gives off.
Julie H-HHS

Unknown said...

I really like this picture! I like the way that the spoon was positioned and the way they lighting was used. I really like the soft lighting because it gives the picture a light and airy feel. This mood really works with the ice cream! I also like the shadow under the ice cream, it really works wit the photo itself. If you were going for a happy, light mood, you definitely achieved it. The picture makes you think about being a little kid and enjoying a scoop of ice cream! I liked your placement as well, I think it was a good idea to do the cropping. The only critique I have is maybe next time try and see if you can get the picture to be a little sharper. Other than that I think the picture was very creative and you did a great job!
Abigail P-HHS

Anonymous said...

I really like this picture! It gives off a fun and happy vibe. I think that you could have focused the camera on the ice cream a bit more just to make it sharper. I also would suggest turning the exposure down just a little.
MaKena C-HHS

Anonymous said...

I really love this photo and it gives off a really happy vibe! I think that the exposure is very well set. The lighting of the picture is very well balanced and I love how there is a shadow from the sundae, but it shows a little blurriness from the sides of the glass to the table. There is a dark area on the right side of the picture and I feel like it could be a little better if you clear that up and make the background all one color! I love the colors of this photo and I love the way you put your sundae in a professional looking glass rather than a bowl! Your photo shoots a happy feeling in people and I definitely would be proud of this picture if I were you!! - Anna D.