Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Oryieon M - Ink Pen

The title of this pictures is called ink pen. It was taken in my history class about 2 or 3 weeks ago. I took it with my iPhone 4s. Their isn’t any edits on the picture.Im not sure how it could have been better.
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Anonymous said...

Interesting Picture! I really like the shadow depth of field in this image. It captures the focus of the pen excellently. I feel like the image would be a bit easier to see if the exposure was a little higher. There is a lot of black in this image that is occasionally difficult to differentiate. I also like how you set the pen in the top left third of the image. It makes the image look a bit more dynamic than just a pen. The lines in the image created by the table top and the laptop case (maybe) also help with how dynamic the image is. I am intrigued by how how you made a simple picture of a pen look like it had its own story. Very good photograph. -Matt H-HHS

October 19, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Anonymous said...

I like how the subject in this picture is in sharp focus as opposed to the soft focus of the background. I would have cropped out whatever that leather thing on the table is, but it’s not too distracting. Just a pen as the subject is pretty boring though, and the mood is really dark and dim.

Ifeanyi M - HHS

October 22, 2015 at 3:09 PM

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