Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Caitlin G- Adventure

The title of this image is ‘Adventure”. It was taken in the car during summer and it was taken with my iPhone 5S. I edited it on my phone with an app called VSCO. It could be better if maybe I it was more focused and edited more.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...


Hey Caitlin, I really dig this picture! I think the colors dancing around inside your glasses (the magenta, , cyan, yellow, and such) are über cool and I'm a little envious of how good it looks. How you managed to take this while driving is above me since its so still and focused properly. It was likely just an accident, but the underpass frames your frames (lel) quite nicely. I do agree though that it could use some more editing, like increasing the saturation or contrast a tad. As well, you would do well to crop a bit off the top, because the tippy top of your forehead and the dark space above your window aren't adding that much and the picture, as good as it, still feels slightly off-balance to me. i think snipping some of the top could eliminate that feeling. Regardless of my gripes, I really do appreciate this picture for all of its Technicolor Dreamcoat glory. Good job!

Anonymous said...

Hello Caitlin. I really like your photo. I feel like the focus could be a bit better, because I know what you're trying to do, and that is to show the adventure that your friend (Or if that's you, not sure) is seeing. I think that's quite cool to be honest. I might try that. I think that the eye is on the rule of thirds, and the red/purple color is also on it which s really quite nice. I feel like this photo is a bit mysterious (Thank you focus problems), I can feel the sense of adventure you're trying to convey, but I'm not exactly sure what type of adventure, so it's a bit of a mystery to me. If it was a bit more in focus I'd be possibly able to tell.

~Alex Z - HHS

Anonymous said...

Caitlin I love this picture!! I love all the different colors in this photo and how they are reflecting off the glasses! This picture is in really good focus except for around the eyes where the color comes in. Overall this picture is amazing!! I think this picture could be better if you turned down the saturation to make the colors not so vibrant so you could see her eyes. I also think this pic could be better if you took it from a different angle so you could see both of her eyes. All in all I would definitely hang this pic in my room! Great Job!!