Monday, February 25, 2019

Jake D- Try and Try Again

I call this photo Try and Try Again because I feel like lots of people can relate to it. This photo is supposed to represent writing a paper but not knowing where to start. But all you have to do it think about it more and try again. To edit this picture I first used Photos and then photoshop. I edited the curves, levels, and added a few filters from the Nik Collection. Personally, I would not change anything about this picture.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love how you title it try and try again and I love it because of how it really makes sense and you know this makes a lot of sense and show the representation of how it brings out its filters
Stephen

Anonymous said...

This picture looks so cool. I love how the title really helps tell the story of the picture. I like how the background is blurred and you really focus on the crumpled piece of paper. I also like how the background is dark, it makes the paper pop. I overall think this picture is great.

Anonymous said...

This picture is really good, I like the way it was edited to be all black in the background then blurring out the paper and pencil and only making it to focus on the crumbled paper ball. Really nice pic!

Anonymous said...

I like this picture because i hate school i feel like it's worthless but I have to keep tying in order to get where i want to be in life that's why i like this picture but I also like the focus on the ball of paper and everything is blurred out but just because its blurred out don't think i didn't notice you need a new pencil

Anonymous said...

This title matched the picture so clearly. I relate so much to this picture because I can never do anything on the first try. Also I love how everything is blurry but not the crumbled up paper.

Jennifer Chave

Anonymous said...

This picture looks really good. Has a great bokah effect on the paper ball. Some sharpening on the paper ball would make this look very nice.

Anonymous said...

This is a really good photo. I love the title. It ties well together and brings out a story. The lighting of this photo looks so good coming in from the side. The focus on the crumpled up piece of paper is so clear and looks good. The details all come together to make this photo great. Good job!

Anonymous said...

The reason that I chose this picture is because I can also relate. This picture shows how the feelings you go through when you are having this kind of problem. The way I see this is the dark represents frustration because you are not able to finish this letter. The wrinkled paper shows the many tries. I love this picture it has a very great significance.
MS-HHS4

Anonymous said...

This is such a creative theme and the depth of field is amazing and brings all the details out and define the edges and crinkles in the paper. Really good job!!!!!