Friday, December 4, 2015

Abby U- Rachel

The title of this image is Rachel. This picture was taken in Homewood, AL in October 2015. It was taken wish my Canon Rebel t5i camera. This picture could be better if it was more focused on her and not the background and if I would have cropped it differently.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

I really like this photo! I like how you added the black and white filter, it gives it a nice touch! i also love how sharp the image is. The only thing that could be better is if you cropped it differently. But overall, I really like it!!!
Mychael O- HHS

Anonymous said...

I like the color in this photo. The black and white makes it very mysterious but cool. I like the contrast between her shirt and the wall. I like how it's cropped, using the rule of thirds. It could have been a little sharper in my opinion, but overall it looks good.

Matthew R - HHS

Anonymous said...

Abby, this is a very beautiful photo. I love how Rachel’s expression gives charm and character to this black and white photo. In regard to a technical area, I like the lighting very much. Her face is perfectly illuminated compared to the other parts of the photo. In regard to a composition area, I agree with what you pointed out about cropping the photo differently. I feel attention would be solely on lovely Rachel if that white vertical bar was cropped out or perhaps just re-touched out. It just feels like it imposes upon Rachel. In regard to an aesthetic area, I certainly adore this photo and would definitely make it a keeper. It would serve well as framed photo. You did a great job!

~RM - HHS

Anonymous said...

I love this photo! I like how she is not smiling and looking serious. The black and white filter really adds a lot to the picture. The only way you could make it better would be if you centered it. But overall, I really like this photo! Great job!!!

Anonymous said...

I love this picture! I love how she's not smiling and the black and white. I like all the color and the contrast.The only thing that could be better is if you cropped it differently. But overall, I really like it.
Blakely W- HHS

Anonymous said...

This is a really great picture! I like how the mood of the picture fits the mood of the girl. I also think the black and white filter was a great idea. It looks good with her to the side but try and see what it looks like with her in the middle.

Anonymous said...

I like this picture. There not a lot of distractions that take away the focus from the model aside from some of background and I like how sharp the focus is on the model. I think you should have cropped the picture differently. I like how the picture is black and white because it gives it a more dramatic feeling. Overall I like this picture.

Nicole T- HHS