Monday, May 2, 2022

Akelsa N- Disney


 I TOOK THIS PICTURE AT DISNEY DURING THE WEEKEND BEFORE SPRING BREAK TAKEN WITH MY PHONE I EDITED IT IN PHOTOS.


8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Um, I am not sure if I love the execution of the image. I feel like the lighting is slightly over exposed and that there is way too much negative space. You could have moved the castle higher up in the frame and zoom in a bit more to counteract that. Also more discussion about your process would have been nice to hear about.

Anonymous said...

This is an interesting picture, it's not easy on the eyes, This picture could have been better if it was edited more and fixed color as well as the position of the castle. Good luck next time.

Anonymous said...

I think the is a clear photo and there is plenty of things in the image to make it interesting. The cruise ship looks kind of creepy but that's not a bad thing, I like it. I might have put a filter on it to make it seem a little less dark but I still like the picture.

Anonymous said...

Very nice picture Akelsa!!! The picture very clear. It's a great view of the castle. Overall amazing image.
HHS-BB

Anonymous said...

I love this photo! I wish there was less sky and more castle. I really like the light and nice mix of colors. Overall the photo is pretty and nice but maybe it could have been cropped or taken at a different angle.

Anonymous said...

Cool picture, however in order to improve it the Framing of the image (the castle) should be a little bit more centered and up right. The castle is a little crooked, leaning to the right, but this is an easy fix. Also adding more contrast because the image is kinda colorless. Cool picture, I like it because you don't see the whole Disney crowd and it just focuses on the castle -RB

Anonymous said...

I love the picture. I would say the exposure of the lighting is a little much. you also did a great job on focusing in on just the castle and it’s not a lot of outside stuff.

Anonymous said...

I dislike this photo. This could have been a good photo, however, the execution of taking the picture was not excellent; it was crooked and at an angle. That is alright maybe next time if given the opportunity you can take the photo when you are at the same distance but aligned better with the front of the castle. The castle appears to be level so you could have also taken the photo where the bottom of the castle was as even and symmetrical as you could have gotten it. The exposure appears to be too high causing it to be a little much on the eyes, instead lowering the exposure and darkening some areas to have a contrast between light and dark probably would have been better because of the clear and bright sky. Editing it in the photos app was not enough you could have taken it into photoshop and used the scorch tool in order to darken areas along with adjusting the hue to make colors stand out more from the darkened areas because the colors are beautiful they should be out there, but the overdone light exposure added outshines the colors and makes them seem faded out and don't really give them a time to shine and blend with the other colors of the castle. The blue almost blends in with the sky so making the blue darker and more vibrant could have also helped, there is also a faint trace of visible gold on the castle it would be marvelous if it were more visible.

-MS