Thursday, August 31, 2017

Jacob T- About Me Still Life

The title of this image is “About Me Still Life.” It was taken at my house on my lower driveway. I took it with a Canon EOS T6 Rebel. I edited it in the photo app and bumped the color up, increased the light with a vignette. I think the items could have been positioned better and taken at a better angle.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I really like this picture because even though all of the subjects are rather simple, you added a lot of intensity to it. The focus is a good balance of soft and sharp, while the Jeep in the background is soft and the items in front are sharper. There seems to be a little bit of a yellow/greenish cast to the picture from the background which is also really nice. I don't know if you cropped the picture at all, but there doesn't seem to be anything that distracts from the subject, so that's really nice as well. All in all, I like the mood of this picture and think you succeeded in telling your "story".
Danielle M - HHS

Anonymous said...

Jacob the lighting in this picture is just amazing i love everything about this picture you did such a good job on this i know what i'm supposed to be looking at its not to dark or to bright its a amazing picture and i love the work you put into it plus the angle. When i look at this picture i want tot study everything about it, i want to learn why you have these items and how often are they used its a really amazing picture and i can look at it all day. This picture give me the mood that its supposed to be chilled and its truly about stuff you like, you truly showed what you like in one picture and maybe
Jahred.T-HHS

Anonymous said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Anonymous said...

I love how in this photo the main focus is on the pos in front of the jeep but you also don't lose focus of the jeep it's self. When I see this picture I believe that it presents your and who you are even thought I don't know you. I feel like this was a great way to express and some of the things you like. I feel as if this tells a story about you and what you like or what you are interested in. Me personal I love the picture I would get something like this printed ad hung on the wall.
Camiya M-HHS

Anonymous said...

I really like the lighting in this picture I like what u did on this picture i know what i'm supposed to be looking at and its not to dark or to bright its just right and the angles you did in the picture. When i look at this picture i want to know why u have these items and how ofter they are used in your life its really an amazing picture i could use it as background for my desktop. This picture gives me a chill vibe where i can relax and its truly about the stuff u like, and you expressed what u like in this picture
Kameron W.-HHS

Anonymous said...

I really like how you incorporated the variety of subjects to kind of make a collage of your life, but in one photo. I think the focus is a little off, while the hammer and statue and stuff around that level of depth are in good focus, the books at the foreground of the image are a little blurry and out of focus and I think having that extra sharpness up front really could have helped with the picture. I also feel like you could have edited it to make it a bit darker and bring out some of the darker spots with some more contrast. I really liked how you were almost able to incorporate the rule of thirds and a centered subject into this picture by having everything stacked up in the bottom half of the shot and the statue sticking up along that top left third. I think this shot definitely tells a story and when I first saw the picture I really enjoyed trying to figure out what that story was. Overall very good picture main thing I would adjust is the lighting to incorporate a bit more contrast so things don't look quite so washed out in places.

Christian P.